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Can you please review my issue essay? [#permalink] New post 29 Aug 2017, 06:41
Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.

Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.

In modern age, having an university education is one of the most essential aspects to have a reasonable life. Hence, I am supporting the idea of free university education offered by governments for the students who does not have economical power to afford university education.
Every human being has the right to access an university education. First of all, university education provides a vocation for the students, and not having a vocation is a disadventageous factor to gain decent money. Of course, there are exceptions for this situation, but with the application of free university policy, one of the most important inequalities in our societies may be diminished. Because of the high tuitions of the university education, most of the students coming from poor families are not able to register in their preferred university or even none of the universities. This results as the continuing wealth of the rich part of the society. Free university education gives a chance for the talented poor students to Show their skills and escape from their poverty.
Moreover, it is a known fact that there is a correlation between the lack of education and the increasing number of crimeful events. To give an illustration, in Turkey, the possibility of a crimeful event to occur is increasing in the poor and rural regions. However, a city called Artvin, which is one of the most smallest and poor cities in Turkey, has a great policy which leads to an increase in the education level in the city. Therefore, for the last five years, it is the city where the crimeful events occur less. Every other aspect is supporting the possibility for a huge number of crime, but a decent education level prevents that.
Finally, the people with an university education tends to be more effective in life, thus giving a free university education may lead to a growth or stability in economy by increasing the number of workes with ability. The Scandinavian countries are great examples fort his claim, the number of people with university level education are high in these countries and they have strong economies without any foreseen risks.
To summarize, higher level of educations result as more plausible and equal communities to live inside, and to reach this level of education the governments should give the universal right of education for every human, offering a free university education is one important policy to reach this aim.
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Re: Can you please review my issue essay? [#permalink] New post 01 Sep 2017, 11:24
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Sorry for late response.

Honestly, your AWA is insufficient.

See here to see how to structure it in a proper manner. greprepclub-guide-to-awa-the-clear-cut-3426.html

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